Please help me edit my resume...thanks. looking for an Acct.internship, thanks

Please help me edit my resume...thanks. looking for an Acct.internship, thanks.?
OBJECTIVE •To obtain an accounting internship, where I can apply the skills that I learned in my accounting courses to a real-world setting. EDUCATION School XXX’, Boston, MA Candidate for BSBA Accounting & Communication Studies Honors and Clubs: Dean’s List, Commuter Student Association, and Finance Committee. EXPERIENCE COmpany XXX Boston, MA Assistant to Manager of Finance and Administration December 2006- August 2008 •Maintained a positive relationship with administrators by ensuring that their materials were delivered in a timely manner. •Assisted company’s accountants and finance manager with several administrative task •Assisted with preparing for annual audits •Filed weekly account payables invoices. •Daily cash applications and receipt processing. •Used communication skills by greeting visitors as they enter COMPANY XXX. •Maintained a clean and organized environment. Company XXX Boston, MA Office Assistant June to August 2006 •Assisted in directing the activities of student at The Nicastro Learning Center at Quincy College •Increased students knowledge and competence of the new software in the center. •Enforced Learning centers rules and regulations to guide conduct maintain discipline and safeguard health of students •Archived and organized files. •Organized and coordinated stock Company XXX. Boston, MA Sandwich/Salad PreparerFebruary to June 2005 •Prepared salads and sandwiches to individual order of customers. •Received cash, checks and completed credit-card transactions from customers and employees •Assisted customers by providing information about menu items. •Retrieved customer orders over the phone. SKILLS Proficient in Microsoft Office; word, excel, Powerpoint and access and Filemaker Pro. And Strong Organizational and Interpersonal Communications abilities
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Very good resume. Couple pointers though: What was your position at Quincy College? Needs to listed. Also if you have received any recognition in a job - be sure to put it down. such as received award for increased productivity.


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Lost of good information. Needs to be more results oriented. What did you accomplish? What did your actions do to impact the business results? What impact did you have on customer satisfaction? How much cash did your decisions bring into the company? Can you document ROI on any of your projects/actions? Accountants are a dime-a-dozen...business thinkers will ALWAYS command a premium, regardless of market conditions. Consider reading Ram Charan's book: What the CEO Wants You To Know or attending workshop like found at www.6businessdrivers.com...there are many out there, this is just an example. Good luck.